Tuesday, August 28, 2012

Evaluation

By Kathy Encisa

Gonzales, Kamila -  8/10 Slight grammatical errors; title can be misleading
Lao, Jay Ann - 7/10 grammatical errors; presentation of the subject matter can be made better
Perez, LJ - 9/10 slight grammatical errors; article sounds inviting
Yonzon, Margarette -9/10 article sounds inviting

By Kamila Gonzales

Encisa, Kathy -I will evaluate Kathy's blog 8 out of 10 because her blog is somehow attractive to the consumers.
Lao, Jay Ann - I will evaluate Jay Ann's blog 8 out of 10 please take note of some sentences because some of them were repeated. For me I see it enticing to the consumers.
Perez, LJ - I will evaluate LJ's blog 8 out of 10 some of his points in his blog were true. Add more informations. 
Yonzon, Margarette - I will evaluate Margarette's blog  8 out of 10 when I saw her photos I craved for eating freshly baked breads. 

By Jay Ann Lao

Encisa, Kathy -
Gonzales, Kamila - 
Perez, LJ - 
Yonzon, Margarette -

By LJ Perez

Encisa, Kathy -
Gonzales, Kamila - 
Lao, Jay Ann - 
Yonzon, Margarette -

By Margarette Yonzon

Encisa, Kathy -
Gonzales, Kamila - 
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